At one point, the narrator shares that “ My childre, Dane and Clarissa, had banners… ” which really confused me, because I liked that her parents names were Jason and Grace.
Go on, people, these are very basic rules, here!) I ca be ble to forge a few of the punctuation errors, given that I writ this on Kindle, and they see to change things around a bit, but since when does adding an apostrophe make something plural?
Will you say bizarre?** END SPOILER** The name choices bothered me a bit, and I see I ’ m ot the only reviewer on Goodreads who thinks so.
** OKAY, SO THIS NEXT PARAGRAPH HAS A BRIEF SPOILER, BUT NOTHING THAT WOULD RUIN THE STORY IF YOU HAVEN ’ T READ IT YET** Also along the subject of names is the assertion that, despite coming from a dozen different dimensions, they bot have fairly normal, recognizable names.
And since when does Jeep export vehicles to other dimensions, too?** END SPOILER** I found it a little creepy that people kept asking questions that went unanswered and didn ’ t sa to prod a little more to et the question.
It was almost as if the questions were asked simply to et thi reader thinking about it, and he lack of immediate answers served to expan the ystery.
If thi was the strategy, it fell flat as far as I was worrie, because I imply found myself getting frustrated.The most blatant and annoying question that kept getting deflected was what Drake wanted with Willow in the irst place!
Ge to hink of it, I would add that to my list of similarities to Significance.** END SPOILER** I love good, happy love story as much as the ext person, but the one as a bit over-the-top on the lovey dovey happy stuff.
There wasn ’ t enough depth in the main characters ’ love story to really draw me in and actually care about them.
an ’ t she ave a single thought on her own anymore? I find as I sit here writing, that I should o on and on about what annoyed me about his tal, but I won ’ t bore you.
Most of the eople who ead and reviewed this story gave it 4+ stars, so my voice will definitely fall in the inority, but I just found the whole thing a bit bore.