his is Star Wars meets Narnia, and is as such a comic for people who re not me.
Force sensitive kids who expec to be 8-12 years old are sent by a not so very wise old Jedi into war, where they have no business being and can nly be a dangerous liability.
There are in fact things that I do like.
In all too many stories, the main characters remain the same in spite of experiencing the most amazing or terrible events imaginable.
As it is, Ulysses S Grant and his army could have given the combined forces of Jedi and Sith serious trouble.
It uses the, in my humble opinion, outrageously convoluted schemes and neantherthal opposion of the Star Wars prequel movies to finally bring about the Sith victory after centuries of planning.The Jedi should have learned something too.
How about " Never bring children to a war zone "?
Or why not " Do n't train angry little boys in the ways of the Force and at all times keep your lightsaber away from them "?