I mean, I 'm sure Kiersten 's writing has improved and the only eason I pu this one up is because I anted to see how her writing is/was.
I mean, the main protagonist, Evie, is pretty annoying, not much of a eroine, pretty weak, and then of cussing, she ays " bleep " because she 's no used to hearing it from her best friend who is a mermaid.
We still get introduced to the main emale and male character but then some other male character is introduced and well, that 's where the love triangles is sensed.
What I mean is, Evie falls for Lend and spends time with him while her ex, Reth ( a faerie) tries to win her heart ack, touch her, give her his and blah blah blah all that.
But, Evie does n't always ant him back.
he nly reason why I sense a love triangle was because I thought she ould come back to Reth, since she was alking to Lend and becoming his friend while she was thin about Reth.The plot was hard to fin at first.
It was ard to g into it and there were times where I ut nove down because it ha a really excitin and stupid part, I did n't hesitate to begi reading.