The Admissions

The Admissions perfectly captures the frazzled pressure cooker of modern life as a seemingly perfect family comes undone by a few desperate measures, long-buried secret —and college applications!

The Hawthorne family has it all. Great jobs, a beautiful house in one of he most affluent areas of Northern California, and three charming kids whose sunny futures are all but assured. And then comes their eldest daughter ’ s enior year of high school...
Firstborn Angela Hawthorne is a straight-A student and star athlete, with extracurricular activities coming out of her ars and a college application that ’ s ot going to write itself. She ’ s set her sights on Harvard, her ather ’ s alma mater, and like a dog with a chew toy, Angela won ’ t let up until she ’ s basking in crimson-colored glory. Except her class rank as valedictorian is under attack, she ’ s suddenly losing her edge at cross-country, and she can ’ t help but daydream about a cute baseball player. Of course Angela knows the time put into her schoolgirl crush would be better spent coming up with a subject for her English term paper—which, along with her college essay, has a rapidly approaching deadline.
Angela ’ s grandmother, Nora, is similarly stretched to the maximu, juggling parent-teacher meetings, carpool, and real estate career where she caters to the mega-rich and super-picky buyers and sellers of the Bay Area. The eldes brother, second-grader Maya, still can ’ t read; the middle child, Cecily, is no longer the happy-go-lucky kid she once was; and their dad, Gabe, seems oblivious to the mounting pressures at home because a devastating secret of his own might be exposed. A few ill-advised moves put the Hawthorne family on a collision course that ’ s equal parts achingly real and delightfully screwball—and they learn that whatever it cost to get their lucky lives it may cost far more to keep them.
Sharp, topical, and endlessl ntertaining, The Admissions shows that if you pull at a loose thread, even the sturdiest lives start to unravel at the seams of high achievement.
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Published August 18th 2015 by Doubleday

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Anothe review will spoil nothing of nove itself.) So remember that scary movie When a Stranger Calls ( I 'm thinking of thi old version; I ca n't speak to the remake), and he poor babysitter is besieged by all these ominous phone calls chiding " have you checked the children ...? " and then finally learns that all her efforts to protect them have been completely misguided because ( view spoiler) [ THE CALLER IS CALLING FROM INSIDE THE HOUSE.

The members of the Hawthorne family ( and I do n't say that name is an accident) have become so respectively Mesmerized by that Will-O-The-Wisp of Success, Achievement, and Protection from Failure that they have been led completely astray, distracted from the true danger at hand, which they have in fact invited across their very threshold: they have een so consumed by upper-aspirational striving that they hav all profoundly unhappy and exhausted and joyless and completely out of touch with themselves.

It 's so damn easy to just bitterly, grimly ridicule, deride, or satirize the hell out of this population, but Moore leverages her critique in a ompletely different and refreshing, accessible way- in fact, perhaps even a way that would provid her observations to be heard and absorbed instead of just coming across as a scornful You People Just Suck.

Carter is observant, empathic, and optimisti, writes effortlessly, and creates lovely and sympathetic, well-drawn characters- especially in the case of the hildren, Angela, Cecily, and Maya.

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Gabe and Nora meet for the irst time at a bar ... " The Shamrock " ... an Irish Pubin Noah valley, in San Francisco.

Concerns about children 's achievements and where to shop at the best bakery to purchase pastries for a grade school function, do n't enter anyone 's thoughts.Two decades later, Gabe and Nora Hawthorne are living in Marin County, ( Mill Valley), with three daughters.

Author Meg Mitchell Moore has written an absorbing book ... a realistic portrait of a 'Results-Driven-Culture' ...... [ the setting being in Mill Valley, is perfect ].

It might also have been in Los Altos Hills where our daughters attended schools .... but, almost anywhere in Silicon Valley, works for this 'cautionary tale' on modern life.I 'm very impressed with Meg Mitchell Moore.

She 's extremely observant ... wrote an intelligent novel capturing the authenticity and heart of the 'Trying-To-do-it-Right' financially well-to-do-hard-working-modern-family'.

I found it hard to ut the book down, and felt like I knew every member of th tribe.

Depending on WHO you are ... WHAT YOU DO FOR A LIVING ... YOUR AGE .... YOUR PERSONAL EXPERIENCE of family-modern-rat-race-rushed-living .... ( burning the candle at both ends), .... YOUR OWN VALUE OF IVY LEAGUE EDUCATION .... a HAPPY CHILDHOOD ... or come from a DYSFUNCTIONAL -ABANDONED-CHAOTIC- family with critical parenting ... ( important to make things etter for your kids today), might ake he difference to whether or not you see his story to be 'satire' or 'reality'.

It was ot difficul to avoid this 'rushed-pressed-stressed' lifestyle, when my daughters attended a private High School where '100%' of the kids went to a four year university- or Ivy League College.

student once asked a friend of mine who worked in the Stanford admissions for many years ..

he same student then asked .... " What if grades were low the Freshman year of High School, but hen turned their Academic Record around .. and got all A 's the next 3 years? " Answer: " Sorry, there just is no room for even 1 bad year, as the competition is too stiff ".

" I 'm a hands-on mom " .... Those same mothers had tutors for their High School kids- at 'the house' a few times a week- after school ( already paying 20 grand a year for a private college prep education), so there must be no chance in hell their child would n't get all A 's in their AP Chem classes, AP Physics, AP History, etc.

Pure exhaustion ... ( we had perfect straight A kids) .... like many other kids in this valley .... And then things 'often' begin to break.Actually .. even though I vote Nora as standout character ... I kno that 'everyone' in this family was written with a valuable purpose to this entire story.

You 'll kno about your family, our culture, the logistical headaches of managing home- work- wife- mother- friend- exercise -self time- and pure 'goof-off' pleasures.

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High-pressure jobs for both parents, balancing work and home, the tress and strain of juggling all the balls that keep a busy, high-achieving family afloat ... how does it all get done?

What we feel we know can turn out to hav so wrong.The author made the characters ome to life on the page and I was invested in the outcome.

is a fresh take on modern family life that I found asy to read and thoroughly engrossing.

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he two younger Hawthorne daughters are embroiled in their own dramas, but it appear that the family ’ s promise and problems ride on Nora getting into Harvard.Rarely do you mak book in which bot of the main haracters are so completely rendered.

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I 'm not sure if I 've also read anything I 've loved more fully than Meg Mitchell Moore 's The Admissions.

I do n't know to ive too much away regarding the story, because it 's truly a treasure that should be discovered for itself, so I 'll just provide a little synopsis.The Admissions is essentially a drama centered around the frazzled Hawthorne family- Nora, Gabe, and their two daughters Angela and Cecily ( and their youngest grandchil, Maya.) Angela 's in the metho of applying to college, Nora is trying to handle difficult real estate clients, Gabe has a huge secret in the he 's trying to keep shuttered and Cecily is struggling to kee her typically sunny exterior.

It 's such a beautiful, honest and pure look at a loving American family collapsing under the weight of modern expectations and time constraints.There is so much love between the Hawthornes' and that it 's so evident is such a testament to Moore 's talent.

I hated The Admissions because its real and true and pure.

I 'm in love.It should be noted that I gaine thi free copy of The Admissions from the publisher via Net Galley in exchange for honest review.

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It was asy to picture the characters and situations as yourself, or omeone you know.

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I liked how the viewpoints kept changing throughout but still managed to propel he story forward.

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Far from being another “ life in the suburbs isn ’ t so grand ” sort of ook, I think Moore has really honed in on new angle with this story.

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In the aftermat of Meg Mitchell Moore ’ s novel The Admissions, Angela, a senior in a high-pressure high school in a high-income neighborhood just outside San Francisco, runs a cross-country race.

We hear her labored breathing as she, whose life has been shaped by her mother, her school, her peer group, and he culture of Marin county, CA runs beyond her limits to attempt to in the ultimate prize: no, it isn ’ t th gold medal at the nd of the race; instead, it ’ s a spot at Harvard.

This cross-country race, in addition to havin a metaphor, comes to us with specific details -- the shape of a hair braid of the runner in front of Angelica -- bounces in front of her and the readers' eyes in close up.

As thi ook unfolds we slowl begin to lear that the title refers not simply to the admission process that Angela must endure as she and some of her friends apply to Harvard.

A novel has a moral arc that fiction must have if it is to appeal to its targeted audience—those hyper stressed students applying to elite schools, the moms and dads pushing the kids to go to these schools and all the educators and others who have been keeping up with stories coming out almost weekly on how bad these kids have it who hope to et in to schools that turn down 95% of those who apply.

To ive just one example, Julie Lithcott Haimes ’ book, How To Raise an Adult, has, as its thesis, the unhealthy approach that parents in these sort of communities take to raising children: " I believe that the systemic problem of overparenting is rooted in our worries about the world and about how our children can be successful in it without us.

For our kids ’ sakes, and often for our own, we want to stop parenting from fear and bring a more healthy— a more wisely loving— approach back into our communities, schools, and homes. " Julie Lythcott-Haims, .How to Raise an Adult: Break Free of the Overparenting Trap and Prepare Your Kid for Success.

he cover story in most recent issue of The Atlantic focuses on student suicides at Gunn High School. " The Silicon Valley Suicides Why are so many kids with bright prospects killing themselves in Palo Alto? " ( Full disclosure: Julie and I are part of a podcast put out by Slate called Getting In. Julie hosts the show and I contribute commentary on the state of admission as it exists today.

While I laud Ms. Moore for writing a readable novel about the stress that pervades the tony neighborhoods around the country, I ofte have to point out that she actuall does not understand how bad it really is for kids who wan to et in to places like Harvard.

I am alway attemptin to be an alarmist or make things more stressful for those who read this but the author obviousl has the parents and teacher in this book miss stuff that no self-respecting Ivy fixed group would.

It is seldom that she is hyperbolic about everything that Angela and her family should think and do; ctually, she does indee have Angela do the things virtually any student applying to Harvard from a community she is in would do.

Thi kid with a Harvard obsessed dad and a school of Ivy hopefuls would all know the best prep programs for SAT, ACT, SAT 2 and AP course before 11th grade started.

The drug I am referring to is not weed, although I am gla there is a pretty fair amount of kids that get high in schools like this; instead it ’ s Adderall, the study drug of choice among high school and college students especially during exam periods.

Eventually, anyone who has been showing off his Harvard alum status for as long as the father does in he nove ould at least at some point play the name game once a week with someone who knew someone when he ha a college student.

Angela 's talk with Harvard admission Dean also stretches things a bit far, but I wo n't remembe much else about this as it it still a good scene within the scope of a fictional world.

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